For English my class was pitted to create a very short story with exactly fifty words. I decided to base my one on sins. Before you read, bear in mind that it is very hard (for me at least) to make a story that is fifty words long when you are used to writing essays that are around 900+ words . So here goes:

Sins of a Solar Empire – The Advent

The console lit up and masses of white dots appeared on the monitor. The ships were unknown to us... We steered the orbiting fleet towards the impeding ships. Crash! An engulfing beam of light threw our vessels into chaos. Was this another act of the Vasari? Or had the exiles returned?

Tell me what you think! I'm open to opinions on it, good or bad!