Wow! What a fantastic prologue! Your story more than lives up the work of givemesomepienow, WOEaintME. There were moments when I was just like, "Yeah, that did happen in the intro of the original game (the bright white light engulfing the station on Kron, the forming of the TEC) or in the game manual (all of that mining background of the Marza and Kodiaks). And to incorporate all three factions at once in the same prologue was a feat.
I do hope that you continue writing - this is some great stuff. You have impressed me and made me happy that even in the relatively small group of people that hang out on these forums, there are still those who are interested in the game's story and lore. And you were willing to write and expand on it.
Thank you for adding this amazing story to the Sins community.
Your story of the assassination that took place to combine the Trade Order and TEC reminded me heavily of Babylon 5's assassination of the president of Earth over Io so that the vice-president could take control. Were you inspired by this, or was it an original idea of yours?
Overall, I just have to say fantastic job. And thank you.